I chose friendly person that agrees to help a homeless person.
It all started on a school trip. Jeff doesn’t really have any friends but on that school trip it might just all change. As they were walking past the park to the imperial war museum they saw a homeless person that goes by the name of Jack. Jack has a bed (which was really just a pile of leaves ), a roof over his head ( which was just trees ) and water (from the water fountain) and while he was sitting down this big bully called Isaac started tacking the mick and was throwing rubbish, at him all of a sudden Jack squawked out “your lucky your with your teacher or I would of chucked it right back at you ” Jeff thought to himself that he should come back after the trip and apologise about what jack has done .
Jeff did exactly that and went “hi my names Jeff” exclaimed Jeff “mines Jack ” replied Jack “I apologise for what happened before” “It wasn’t you why would you apologise if it wasn’t you ” “its on there behalf” and from then on the talked to each other everyday and Jeff would be him something to eat everyday and from then on they both found new friends.
By Aniss Kadri
February 9, 2015 at 11:29 pm
I appreciate your choice ,but when I red your writing ,I did not understand the meaning ,I think there is something missing and you didn’t use punctuation .