Month: June 2015

Autobiography!

Hello my name is Aniss Kadri and am writing to get my autobiography badge am going to start at the beginning I was born on November 4th 2002 on a Monday. At the age of 3 months I  travelled to Algeria and I stayed there for a while then I went to France to go to school. After  that I came back to London and went to walnut tree walk however as I was only a little kid Lambeth (my borough) said that I had to move school’s because it was to far away so I went to Vauxhall primary school and at first I was quite disappointed with this because I’ve made lots of friends and now I wasn’t going to see them. However overtime I got very happy and stayed there for7 years. In those 7 years many different and exciting up, downs and absolutely great.

I was small I loved milk I adored it, I mean I was 4 and I was still drinking milk out of the baby bottle. So my dad took notice of this and said I had to stop this habit or he will chuck my favourite bottle out of the window. Now I didn’t want to happen so I tried really hard to stop this habit but I just couldn’t so when my dad saw me he did just what he said and threw it. The next time I went shopping she bought me a new bottle but I threw it myself.

When I was in year 3 I went to a football tournament with my class wee went through tears, sweat, blood and hard work dedication. After we went through a lot of different and difficult rounds to get to the finals and we did with no games lost. Now we were going to the finals we trained even harder to face wyvil who are our number one enimes in the end we won 12-7 with me scoring 2 goals.

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“Now the tale of the moody land was one of rashid khalifas best -loved stories.”

“Now”-adverb.                                                  ” the”-article.                                                     “Tale”-noun                                                     ” of”-preposition.                                            “The”-article.                                                   ” moody land”-proper noun.                         “Was”-past tense                                            ” one”- noun.                                                    “Of”-preposition.                                             “Rashid Khalifa”-proper noun.                      ” best -loved stories”-noun phrase.          This is a simple sentence and the author used the past tense in this to show that Rashid stories about the moody land was one of his best stories

“As the words left his lips, a penny dropped.”                   as-adverb           the-article              words-noun             left-verb       ,-punctuation         a-article              penny-noun            dropped-past tense of drop         .-punctuation.          this is  compound sentence because it gets broken up by a comma also if you put a penny dropped as the first part it will still make sense.